The Untold Snippet You Voted For

I just had some super-fabulous news about Unspoken, and since it is all down to you, beauteous readers, I decided to give you a snippet of Untold! I put up a poll on tumblr and ‘A Kissing Scene’ won by miles, because you are all saucebuckets.

Your wish is my command. Spoilers, of course, and THANK YOU!


Holly leaned against the bar. At the same time, Jared came over and dumped his empty tray. There was snow on the ground, but he had the sleeves of his shirt rolled up past his elbows and a couple of buttons undone. He looked overheated and overtired, and aside from that, Holly didn’t know if he was feeling anything at all. He wasn’t like Ash: he was like the other Lynburns, with faces cold as stone and eyes cold as steel.

There was a splash of what seemed to be lime cordial on his open collar. When he dumped the tray, he pushed his hair back and looked at Holly. “You look like you could use a real drink,” he said indifferently.

“Please,” Holly responded.

Jared leaned over the bar and tipped some whiskey into Holly’s glass. Holly drank it.

“Thanks.” Holly looked up from her drained glass to Jared’s eyes. She realized he was looking at her with a certain consideration.

There was no sweet curl to his sullen mouth, no excitement and no nervousness betrayed. He looked just like she felt: as if he would do anything to feel differently than the way he did now. His eyes were beacon-bright. He looked like driving too fast down a dark lane.

Holly met his eyes, and did not look away. Jared put his hand out over the corner of the bar and drew her slowly toward him. She let him do it because nothing about his demeanor suggested that he would care if she pulled away.

“I can’t hurt you,” she asked. “Can I?”

Jared murmured, as if he was telling her a secret: “You’re welcome to try.”

Then she was flush against his body, the corner of the bar digging sharp into her back and his warmth going through her, turning into heat.

Jared leaned forward and set his mouth against hers. The kiss turned deep almost instantly, his hands clenched in the curly weight of her hair. The noise and lights of the bar faded away to a buzz in her ears, light dying behind her closed eyelids.

When the kiss broke apart, Holly’s mouth was stinging and she was staring up at him.

Jared looked down at her. “Want to go up to my room?”

Holly said, “Yes.”

12 Responses to “The Untold Snippet You Voted For”

  1. October 25, 2012 at 10:41 pm, Claire Andress said:

    Oh wow. I see I shouldn’t have asked.

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  2. October 26, 2012 at 3:11 am, Marie @ Marie Loves Books said:

    WHAT. THE. #$%&?!

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  3. October 26, 2012 at 11:00 am, Varsha Dinesh said:

    Oh, Sarah. Fresh fan, just reeling from the end of Unspoken…and now I come across this. Sad, sleepless nights to follow.

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  4. October 28, 2012 at 4:22 pm, jq said:

    And Kami is where is all of this?!

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  5. October 29, 2012 at 2:32 pm, jeannette bruce said:

    Damn, damn, damn! Not the kissing scene I wanted! 😛

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  6. November 02, 2012 at 11:53 am, Book Review: 'Unspoken' (The Lynburn Legacy #1) by Sarah Rees Brennan | The Young Folks said:

    […] does end on a somber note. (If you want to feel more depressed and add some confusion to the mix, read this tease from the sequel, Untold!) So now, I really really care about these characters and need to know what happens to them […]

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  7. November 03, 2012 at 8:58 am, Saffron Chute said:

    Hey Sarah! I can’t believe the ending of unspoken! I haven’t woken up immediately the next morning debating to myself how it will go in the next book since the ending of noughts and crosses by Malorie Blackman! I love Jared and Kami and understand why he is so angry with kami for breaking their connection and now covering it by being hideously horrendous to her! At least I can see where the next book is going and thanking you that there is a next book or I would have had to cry over that ending!

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  8. November 11, 2012 at 2:49 pm, Racebabe85 said:

    I am looking forward to Untold, but OMG Kami, and Angela…

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  9. November 13, 2012 at 5:29 pm, erica said:

    i LOVE!!!! unspoken its a great book i finished it in less than a day. but how can this happen!! jareds kamis! there soulmates they know each other inside out i really hope this is just a stage for jared. and that him and kami get reconected and he understands that if she hadent done what she did they would both be dead she did it out of love. ok im writing to much i really hope UNTOLD comes out sooner than august cuz i already read UNSPOKEN 3 times and just cant wait!

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  10. November 15, 2012 at 3:12 am, Imani Leach said:

    Oh my gosh! This makes me wanna throw my laptop against the wall. I litrally just finished Unspoken and I am heartbroken.

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  11. November 25, 2012 at 8:22 am, Diane Wei said:

    D: Why not Kami and Jared? Please?

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  12. December 11, 2012 at 11:14 am, Sheena said:

    The bastard..
    I cant wait for UNTOLD!

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